New Piece

[Auron-X]

For this piece, I was trying out this "Pixel Stretch" thing for like the 4th time (stuffed up the other times, they turned out crap), and somehow it turned out to be, me messing around with different things and stuffing them together.... but a bit more orgranized than that, xP. O_o
Yeah, I made three versions, the plain one, one with text, one with text + stock (this one looks fugly, but oh well). With teh one with text, I need some help with it, the text looks a bit off.... Or is it just me?
http://img325.imageshack.us/img325/9972/boebannernotext6ob.jpg
^ Non-text one.
http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/310/boebannertextversion5vp.jpg
^ Text one, clan banner (for another forum)
http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/6179/boebannerstockversion2mx.jpg
^ Text + Stock, turned out crap.

Comments, suggestions and critisim appreciated ^^.

[Akabane-X]

It's good and the bg is cool. Abstract or Grunge? Can't get it.
Don't put any stock(s) anymore, it'll be good without any
stock(s). The border is just plain and simple but still, it fits.
For the text, I dun have any suggestions.

1st - Good
2nd - Very Good
3rd - Fair(Remove the stock)

[Auron-X]

Well the 3rd one is pretty much teh 2nd one with a stock, just wanted to see what people think of it with a stock, I don't like it that much.... some people might. And yeah the text looks a bit off, I need a bit of help with that.

[Akabane-X]

Well, maybe you can get some help from here:

http://www.good-tutorials.com or
http://www.pixel2life.com

[Auron-X]

lol. Good-tutorials <3 Haha.
Nah, i'm good, but thanks anyway.

[Sixthcrusifix]

hmm. . . Looks good but the object in teh third one, it needa to have it's contrast upped and it's lightness downed so it matches a tiny bit better with the BG I think. Looks really cool though.