Nine Letters

[Dale Anthony]

Meh, I rarely write poems anymore but I might aswell give this one a go.

Before I sleep, I spell your name and weep away.
Nine letters, before I'm sane.
If I die, from this pain.
Could you find me a Heaven to stay?
I'm not lonely but I'm sad.
That you've not called me and that you're mad.

If you've forgiven me, before I go.
Place open your arms, come see me show,
That I never hated you whilst I was alive,
and once I'm gone, I will still love you with these eyes.

Yeah, it's short...I might still work on it. What do you guys think?

[Tharrick]

Dominique is nine letters
Coincidence... or obsession? :P

[Lei]

Well I like it Dale. Y'know what else has 9 letters Elmo, I loved you. Or crabbysan. Loads of words have 9 letters, so theres no reason for it to be her name.

Though it might be, which is sweet.... only Dale knows. =D

But I like it, it's thoughtful and I haven't seen him write anything like this before.

Needs more though. ^_^

[Dale Anthony]

Hell, I'd be lying if I said the Nine Letters were Tangerine or something like that but yeah lol. It's not an obsession...at least I hope no-one thinks it is. Just, if you like someone you've gotta show them with as much love as you can give them...I guess and yeah, I used to write all the time Kayleigh and I might write more. Depends how I feel lol. But thanks both of ya. :)