-Heavenly Spirit-

[Xyrin]

This poem is close and dear to me... If you make fun of it in any sort of way, even jokingly, I will never forgive you for it...


-Heavenly Spirit-

Through out your life of love and pain.
There was not one thought that came of vain.

Love filled your fluttering heart.
Nothing being able to break it apart.

You will always stay in our hearts and minds.
Throughout all of the lands, and all of the times.

You will never be left-left to wander alone.
Throughout life, our thread of life is sewn.

Our minds break as our hearts ache.
Just be happy in heaven for us, for all our sake.

To heaven, on you go.
You yourself, make all our hearts grow.

Now it's time to end, it's almost done...
This poem is for you Grandma...From your loving Grandson.

[Dale Anthony]

You know, if anyone was a real human being, why the hell would they take the piss outta such a lovely poem?

If you have something to write about you do it, regardless of topic and what makes a poem good is when you write something so personal and so deep within you. It's very nice work Xyrin! :D

[Xyrin]

Thank you, for the support.

I wrote it while I was crying, so as you can tell, it was all from my heart. I wrote it down while at the funeral, and read it off to everyone..

A quote from my mom,

"No one started crying until Brian got up there, and read the poem..."

[Dale Anthony]

I can understand. I think your poem would have said enough for just about everyone who was there.

[Starfire]

It's sweet, like a song.

[zimac_muiea]

Wow!!! as is see in your poem... your really in deep pain...:(

[vulgaR]

This was truly beautiful.I enjoyed reading it.