AJ's lyrical genius ^^

[..::AJ::..]

i said i'd do it....so i shall!!!

until i run out of lyrics, and notation, i'll put up a new song every so often...and it also means that if i lose the paper it's written on, i can just read this

On my own
Everything is happening so fast,
i can't stop to look and see,
and no time to even rest,
from the harshness of what to be,
and through the troubles,
life seems to slow down, quickly.

and i'm on my own again,
it hurts so bad,
to see everyone else, with someone,
on my own again, with no one there beside me,
it's just the end though,
not much time left.

horrendous skies above me
a ridden wasteland infront
to the left of me, an old story has just died,
i am waiting, for the sun to shine,
just waiting for my release

Repeat chorus.

meh...emo, but it was written quite a while ago.

i like it ^^

[Kai Hiwatari]

looking good so far....what kind of style of music will you be doing?

[..::AJ::..]

that's the thing....i write everything, and my band do everything.

we got so far:
metal,
prog,
rock,
soul,
jazz,
blues
instrumental ballads
and my personal favourite, classical.WOO FOR THE SAX AND TEH FLUTE AND TEH VIOLIN!

[Kai Hiwatari]

wow sounds sorta like my band XD....
yaaay for metal and rock...^^ heheh
i wanna hear some when its recorded

[Dale Anthony]

that's the thing....i write everything, and my band do everything.

we got so far:
metal,
prog,
rock,
soul,
jazz,
blues
instrumental ballads
and my personal favourite, classical.WOO FOR THE SAX AND TEH FLUTE AND TEH VIOLIN!

Dude, I love the lyrics and I like your ideas...but SOUL? WHAT THE HELL?! Never bring soul into a TRUE rock band my friend. You don't wanna end up a charv. (Note = Soul is charv music (eg. Joss Stone))

[Kai Hiwatari]

Chav dammit XD...im kidding dale hun...lol accents are cuute ^^

although i have to admit i do like a bit of the classical music there ^^

[..::AJ::..]

Firstly, dale,

JOSS STONE IS AMAZING!

she was live, she still is, so shush.

secondly, we're not a rock band, those are just things we have tried, for we are metal alternative ^^

Finally, thank yew cheryl ^^

NEXT!

Shine

((NB:these next 3 songs kinda link together, so if you could put that in mind, then HOKAY ^^))

clouds,
allowing sunshine to pass through,
sounds,
in which brings me closer to you
shine,
a song which i wrote for you,
time,
which is ticking.

and everyday,
i seem to wonder, what went wrong,
i seem to wonder, what went right,
i found the light,
through shine.

thieves,
stealing hearts from the love,
Trees,
supplying life and,
leaves,
colours changing through the ages,
agreed,
laws that everything runs by and i ((chorus))

days pass by,
and,
nothing changes

clouds pass by and still
nothing changes

i'm sick and tired of seeing the same things again.

it seems so pointless and ((chorus))

~FIN~

not my best, not my worst but it sounds very good with the added guitar part ^^

[Lei]

I think they rock. =D And yah, I don't post in these kinda topics, so be privilaged...=P

Yeah, they really do sound awesome, you've got some talent...^_^ *Cuts off your arms to take the talent for herself.*

[..::AJ::..]

THAT'S IT!!!! MORE LYRICS!!!

this one is part 2 of the 3 linking songs

THUNDER AND LIGHTNING! *zap*/ STORM

a storm is beginning to start,
from the barren wastelasnd to the top of its heart
it's gonna try and rip all the flesh from your bones
and no one will miss you at all in your home

a huge sandstorm is approaching your way,
sturring and sturring day after day
from the lungs of the haze, and the fire of the sky
the sun will melt all the blood that all dries
and the start of the end is beginning to hail,
with nothing else living,
it all seems to fail

jeperdising (spelling?) the last of your breath
waiting for the abyss called death,
it all seems to hail, and the skies seem to fail,
with the wind, and the sand, and the lightning, and thunder and!

((this is ONE huge example of metal alternative...imagine lotsa dist, with a 3 octave whammy, and a huge range of harms ^^))

very short, lots of energy, works so well on stage ^^

sadly this is the least favoruite of my songs, well the lyrics anyway

MORE COMMENTS PLEASE!!! ^ .. ^

^____________________________________^

[..::AJ::..]

i guess this is allowed, as it's my thread.

if it's not, just tell me, and i'll edit it into the other post.

another.

Rain/Water judge

can't see her, it's all shrouded
not here, just cloudy

it's just killing me, splitting the stream
repairing the kinetics, joining the seams.

just like worn out shoes, nothing to lose, so just rip them apart.

*guitar solo lasting 2 minutes XP*

just end it, feel the pressure, rising, and exploding.

(bridge)

[] -palm mute
{}- A.H
E------------------------15-14-16-15-14-16-15-14-16-----------
B-----------------------------------------------------------{8}-{10}
G--------2h3----------------------------------------------------
D-[0]---------[0]-[2]--------------------------------------------
A-[0]x8-------[0]-[3] x 5----------------------------------------
D-[0]---------[0]-[2]--------------------------------------------

Chorus

the only thing that keeps me going,

seems to be your smile,

and threoguht the rain,

all will be seen.


all for now ^^

[midori4]

Even though the rain has stopped
on this weekend afternoon,
I'm walking the streets all alone,
even though
I want to be with you.I should have known this.
If I fell in love with you that much,
I would hurt just as much.Even though I know it's heart-wrenching,
I keep thinking only of you,
even when
I can't see you.[Instrumental]Even though
I know I shouldn't think about
how I wish we could always be together,even now, the voice of my heart,
which I've tried to suppress,
seems to overflow
endlessly...
so much so that it hurts.I should have known.
I just can't keep my love for you
inside, all to myself.But now, it's a precious thought.
I believe in the truth
only I see,
and keep on loving you.[Instrumental]I should have known.
I just can't keep my love for you
inside, all to myself.But now, it's a precious thought.
I believe in the truth [1]
only I see,
and keep on loving you.

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[Miaka & Tamahome]

[Grae]

Aj, you shoul dlook up the misfits, and their subtle use of the 3/4 timescale :p

And Dale, Joss Stone is not soul, she's soul pop, and not charv music, more like 12-year-olds-yet-to-realise-how-shit-life-is music

wanna know soul? Look up sum Seal