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vulgaR
19-03-2006, 03:03
Monkey has had enough to eat,
Sitting dreary of watching time beat
He's planting trees to make it greener
He says his disease makes his senses keener

Monkey watches the birds fly home every night
He watches them until they are out of sight
And as the sun heads west,
He knows he has enough to last in his chest

And before the day comes to a close,
He burries all that he chose
To live the eternal life,to wait in line
And still have some time to shoot the nine

-Thanks to Sixthcrucifix for the help.

Sixthcrusifix
20-03-2006, 13:32
NOt bad at all, I think there's an error right here: "some time to left"

I like it. And that's saying something because I generaly don't enjoy rhyming poetry.

vulgaR
20-03-2006, 23:15
Thanks alot man.Not proofreading is a really bad habbit that I often exhibit.