Soft

[vulgaR]

The day is soft
But I am here
My face was ripe with green
But something went wrong inside

I don't know what happened
But now I just want to cry
And to cry is to be blessed
Because everything begins a new

I ate the food that I wanted
My tears made it wet
And the cold earth turned black
I wish I knew what happened

I knew it was my plan
But something went wrong on the inside

And as I thought I knew what
I wished I was with you
It'd make the hole deeper
Deeper with your soft love shit

And now I have cried a thousand miles
Now my head is in the sky
My body burns high
And my bones ache in the dreams

[Tharrick]

So is it the other person's body which burns high and aches in dreams? If it is, it'd be 'Thy body burns high' rather than 'thou' because 'thou' = 'you'

Other than that, not bad

[vulgaR]

I was hoping someone would pick up on that.Thanks.