Kagaminiutsuru

[Tharrick]

Night begins to fall;
My window becomes instead
a darkened mirror

[Depu Techiikue]

Nice haiku, I like the concept and the darkness reference. The ending left me to reflect and ponder on what else could happen. You should expand on this piece and create a world with words. :P

But, great poem.

[Tharrick]

You should expand on this piece

It doesn't need expanding, it's a haiku :P It stops being haiku as soon as you think about expanding it.

and create a world with words.
Since haiku are supposed to be a frozen moment in time, that's the ultimate goal - to sum up the total world of concentration at that single moment. If I was that good, I'd do this professionally :P

[Blade]

Very interesting, yet good as well! I am not familiar with this "haiku" concept, but I get the idea that it's pretty much entirely metaphoric?

[Tharrick]

It could be. This poem could well be talking about how the clarity of the human soul darkens as life goes on. Or it could be me talking about how windows get more reflective at night. Read into it what you will (Hint - the second one is what it actually is :P)

[vulgaR]

Your haiku's are so beautiful.It's a shame that they can't all be replied to because one is more beautiful and thought illiciting than the next.My replies would begin to seem redundant now wouldn't they :) ?