Spring Break

[vulgaR]

I stepped out into the thin sun
I rode the powerful wind that day
The beast was kind and carried me home
And I said goodbye with a big smile

I ate the fruits
I sang the rhythm in my head
I laughed as my sanity played dead
And I left all of my emotions behind


I sat and wondered,where you were
I turned my hand to see your name
I felt the things in my silent dreams
Yet I felt incomplete

And as the sunset approached,
I put you and I together
Not with words,but with feelings I never felt before
The result was dandy indeed

So with great unease
I breathed the day's last breath
Another beautiful day gone by,without you to hold
I think that is love

[Depu Techiikue]

Interesting concept, and reading it was fresh. I like your metaphors and references in this, they keep it complex but simple at the same time. I like the way the climax is resolved. Nice poem, be sure to share some more. :)

[vulgaR]

eeek

i love your reply as it has made me so happy

thank you so much so much