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Blade
23-04-2006, 13:08
Consequences

Why can’t I face my own choices?
Why don’t I win in my head?
Why can’t I find sanctuary in vindication?
Why did I say what I said?
Why does everything remind me?
How did it come to this?
Why I am I bleeding the tears I’ve shed?
Now that we have shared our last kiss.

It's not the best thing I have wrote by a country mile, but I think that the emotion attatched is strong enough to deliver my thoughts.

Dusk
02-05-2006, 17:34
Did you really write this? I see in the title of thread you spelt it "Consiquences" but the title of the poem says "Consequences", i'd understand if E and I were close together but they aren't.

Tharrick
02-05-2006, 17:52
In addition, I don't think much of the poem itself, regardless of authorship

Blade
07-05-2006, 12:55
Yeah I did - and I feel hella stupid about the typo. I wrote it out in word and it must have corrected my incorrect spelling before I pasted it here >_<