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Tharrick
08-05-2006, 02:20
Striding on the ground,
The crane looks up to the sky
and spreads his long wings
lanaia74
19-11-2006, 11:57
Totally AWESOME!
*Death_Line*
20-11-2006, 04:21
short..but gets to the point lmao i like it :D
Zal
20-11-2006, 22:10
This was sorta funny, does need more depth and more content but just my opinion, anyways ncie work keep them coming if you can.
Tharrick
22-11-2006, 10:26
does need more depth and more content but just my opinion

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku

If I made it longer, it wouldn't be a haiku