Thoughts~

[Müninn]

Mostly crap lol... wrote it while I was sitting on my roof staring at the stars. So um yeah >_> Crappy >_>



I look in the mirror, I see your face
I turn around, but you're not there

You may not be there, but I can feel your presence, your warmth
I can feel your smile, beaming upon me
Bringing me joy, where there once was none

I can feel your hand, upon my shoulder
Pushing me forward, when I only think of going back
Giving me the strength and courage, to go on

You may not be here, the miles may be many
But I can feel your thoughts are with me
Guiding me, encouraging me to move forward

Bringing light into my every day

And as I sit and stare, off into the night sky
Thoughts of being alone, creep into my mind
But then I think of you, and know you do the same
And realize, that I shall never be alone
Thinking of you, thinking of me
Brings us together, so happily

Bringing light into my every day
I can feel your smile, beaming upon me
Bringing me joy, where there once was none

You may not be here, the miles may be many
But I can feel your thoughts are with me

And I can feel your love, within my heart
I walk on, knowing that I am not alone

As long as you still think of me, I am not alone...

[squall]

it was not crap i liked it you did good on it.

[Mirae]

Nice lyrics/poem indeed =o
Quite philosophical and positive :P
Good job! xD
(Lol, you and your roof =P)

[Seraphis]

/clap

Hey Muninn ^^ Thats not crappy.. Its a very thoughtful poem and I like it.. Your persona has a longing which we can reflect on ourselves and it makes it more touching. (arrrgh just came from lit class bad time to start @@)

Very well done ^^b Keep it up~

[Angel's Trident]

Oh MY LORD FINALLY!!! I have been waiting so long to read a poem/lyrics that DIDN'T RHYME and is still GREAT at the same time. I'm so sick of reading too many poems that over do the rhyming!!!! But well done!, I agree with everyone else in saying that THIS IS NOT CRAP!! Bravo