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rpg_sk8ergirl7
11-06-2006, 16:13
Here she comes
Stair by stair; step by step
To hear more drums

They play the song
That she hadn't heard for so long
Yet, she's scared,
The sound is weird
They are playing themselves
Like little elves
But pounding and pounding;
until the rounding

Here they come
One by one
She was cold
The house was sold

a_nirvana_fan
11-06-2006, 22:38
Good work, I liked it anyway:D

Keep more coming!

lanaia74
22-11-2006, 11:01
Your words flowed like music! Superb! Bravo! Applauds!

Zal
23-11-2006, 03:02
Nice poem, i like it, good writing on your part, nice job, hope to see more of it soon.