False Situation

[Tidus]

Well, like in old times, i'll come again with my poems, hehehe, i don't think this is one of my bests ones but at least its not trash :) it was written in one of my love depressive moments so now that i passed that feel free to critizised it as much as ya can ;)


False Situation

Time passes, but forgetting was forgotten
Life was vanished, and the smile was turned around
But even if everything was suppose to go on
Nothing went back, neither north

Some things are no more than a false situation
A trick from heaven, or a dream of your dreams
Though things happen, they are never true
Even though I would like to cry, I will not

Time passes and goes on with a “non stop” sound
And I still think about your little smile
I would like to dream this, so when I wake up I’m not hurt
But a dream is never real, and reality is what I love about you

What shuts me down, is when I see your sight, confused eyes are they
Red dots that shine like the sea at the same time
Too, with a black gold hair, but with a smile that never cease
That smile, makes me understand, this is no false situation. This is our reality.

[Yuna_03]

Thats a really nice poem full of emotion i loved it
whom is the peom about?

[Depu Techiikue]

I like the words you used, the phrases, how they coincide with one another. I like how you decided to contradict yourself in here too, but make it all seem like it is normal. Definitely full of emotion as Yuna said. I really enjoyed reading this. :)

[lanaia74]

You are very talented! Totally AWESOME!