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Xyrin
24-07-2006, 06:50
Even as the tears roll down my face, I look in your eyes and I crave your taste. Give me what I love, give me what I crave. Give me what makes me happy, over and over of what I have to slave. My heart is aching as I wait for your voice, whispering out from your lips, wanting to desperatly hear that voice. I love you, with all of my heart and mind. Sink into me for ever and every time, we can hold and cuddle with a kiss on the cheek. "I love you more than anything" with a small wink and a cuddle into your chest. And then as you whisper back, "Don't worry, I also love you more than the rest." So as we lay here and cuddle our way into dreams, always remember my love for you, will always be more than it seems...

Depu Techiikue
27-07-2006, 19:54
Such a nice and soft poem. :P

I like how you've created an open emotion for the reader but gave direction. It's nice it has a happy ending. Nice poem here Xyr, keep up the good work! =)

lanaia74
03-12-2006, 12:37
VERY well done!