Torture

[Depu Techiikue]

Searching for liberation, all I can see is darkness
Pick me up off my feet, show me the light, brother
A man dressed satanic, preaching for glorification
Tell me how to live my life, brother, I dare you
I will wreck vengeance upon your soul, brother
Exemplified by anger, leaving you in a state of vanquish
Give me life, then abandon me, I see of you
Endless suffering, losing my sense of direction
Morphing into something that cannot be controlled
Summon all my anger, release it into the atmosphere
Brother, today is the day you die, for what you've done
Tell me how to live my life, brother, I dare you
I will wreck vengeance upon your soul, brother

[Tharrick]

In all honesty, this is the first poem you've written that I've enjoyed, although I think that knowing what you've been through helps me see the source of the emotions you write.

[Yuna_03]

this peopm is really kool i enjoyed reading it
by reading this peopm i sense the emotion in your words so powerful

[Marcus Leonhart]

this poem is a one of a kind
i havent read many of you poems so i havent gotten the feel from it really.
but one thing is, i dont really understand the poem, and i dont think it was meant for me to understand.
it was good, it had a satanic feel to it, almost evil. and i really liked it alot.
keep up with the good work.

[Depu Techiikue]

Thank you very much everyone for the feedback and comments, I find it very helpful and very supporting. I'm glad to see my poetry can still entertain some people, almost as much as it did when I was an active writer.

Heh, thanks Marcus. Basically it's a poem in the point of view of someone who has been tortured by another since birth, and this person is considered family. And the person who is telling this poem has finally come to realize they're living in a false life and they seek revenge. :P

[lanaia74]

Brilliant! Superb! Bravo!

[Zal]

oh

You make some nice poems in here i have been glad to read them and cant wait to read many more so keep em coming good stuff in here.