Sansai

[Tharrick]

Illumination;
Musket-fire from skies above
rains down on the ground


Need explanation? Go and look the title up, it's a japanese word :P

[Depu Techiikue]

I like how the title and the poem connect to make reference to the topic, which is guided but still free. When thinking of the nature of the word sansai, I started thinking about a family farm being raided upon and their home and fields being destroyed. The imagery in your poems is always open, I like that. Awesome poem man. :)