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Deknor
09-08-2006, 00:40
Retracing steps of past time affections,
recreating emotional reflections.
A love lost to the insanity,
a love lost leaving me lonely.

Gentle and play-some as kids often are.
A flowering relationship straight from the heart.
Foolish I was to call you my own,
for now I stand all alone.

Entirely wrought for passion and lust,
I actually thought you were in love.
Falsehood was all that was given to me,
forever now I am lonely.

Dripping with blood pouring from my heart,
the knife you placed, carving your art.
You are the wicked I rant about,
yet strangely I can't do without.

Reach out to my bloody hand,
blood of sorrow and pain.
Realize how much you hurt me,
realize your mistake.

lanaia74
15-11-2006, 11:14
VERY well done!

Sephy88
15-11-2006, 23:45
Good,VERY good, I know what its like to be heart broken, and that described it perfectly, a very good piece of work:D