Fuji

[Tharrick]

Wisteria grows
white amongst the green grasses;
August clouding dark



Summer begins to fade into Autumn. Days grow shorter, darker. Nights deepen and lengthen.
We stand on the edge - to one side, summer. To the other, autumn.
This haiku uses kigo from both summer and autumn, one on each side of the separator, to describe this.

[Depu Techiikue]

I like how you're able to describe something so well with such little words, you're really good at that. :p

As I was reading it, I felt a dark but light tone to the poem, like an unbalanced equation between the two. It was a really good haiku. Keep posting your poems. =)

[lanaia74]

Totally AWESOME!

[Sephy88]

That was REALLY good