Blackbird97
12-11-2006, 09:20
i wrote these a while ago, and they aren't good so be cruel, yet spare me repetitive comments like "those suck" or "those are crap".
Unspoken Words: By Blackbird97
Do you hear me?
Can you feel me?
Can you grasp me with your sight?
If so you see my tears
And so much of my grim fright
I am unseen by mortal eyes
Unheard by the ears of man
Untouched by nature
Can you see the light inside me
It glows by the soul of her
Chance and Greed are hers
So until you grasp my words
And Understand
You see me nowhere
Ever Again........
The Cellar: By Blackbird97
He walks down the stairs
He sees the door to the cellar
He sees it through the window
On a windy day
He smells the peaches
They bloom from the trees
The grapes on the grapevine
The ears of corn hear everything
The wind blows the curtains
It rushes through the house
I blows in the smell of fruit
And animals on the farm
He goes outside and opens the door
The door to the cellar
He sees a chair and stored food
This is his only home
So he goes in the cellar
He locks the door
He gets the rope
And slowly waits for it all to end...
Shadows of my Heart: By Blackbird97
The shadows in my heart are there
They get more difficult to bare
I shut my eyes and I try to disguise
What is there in my heart
But it escapes from me
It isn't difficult to visually see
I see it hurt and I see it lurk
Around the corners of my heart
It draws darkness towards my mind
Which is not very hard to find
I know what it has found
A sound howling out to the moon
You hear it saying this
""Please, the darkness in my heart I wish you dismiss!
Please make it disperse today
If you do I promise to say
I will halt my doings wrong!
I will mark a song hailing you""
but sadly no answer, not a single reply
the dwelling shadow in my heart, will allow me to die.....
Falling: By Blackbird 97
I fall into a deep black hole
That goes on forever
As I fall I see your face
Your heart has been severed
I take a look at him
And grin the greatest grin
I saw how he hurt you
You will never see him again
I think of how it will happen
I start to plan it in my mind
I remember how he deeply hurt you
Happiness you tried to find
I waited for you day in and day out
I thought you would realize
That you would no longer have to fear
When you gazed into my eyes
So as I fall down this pit
Into the regions of your heart
I will stay there to help
We will never again have to be apart
The Invisible Girl: By Blackbird97
As I walked in the hall I saw a girl
She was not there today
She is not there any day
She was not there again today
It hurts my heart so I fall and say,
I say that I need her back
I have the strength she said I lacked
I looked for her all day long
I am starting to think what I said was wrong
I walked in the hall today
She was not there again anyway....
i haven't written any in a while so i don't know how much my skills have improved, but i'll post some more here if i write them.
Unspoken Words: By Blackbird97
Do you hear me?
Can you feel me?
Can you grasp me with your sight?
If so you see my tears
And so much of my grim fright
I am unseen by mortal eyes
Unheard by the ears of man
Untouched by nature
Can you see the light inside me
It glows by the soul of her
Chance and Greed are hers
So until you grasp my words
And Understand
You see me nowhere
Ever Again........
The Cellar: By Blackbird97
He walks down the stairs
He sees the door to the cellar
He sees it through the window
On a windy day
He smells the peaches
They bloom from the trees
The grapes on the grapevine
The ears of corn hear everything
The wind blows the curtains
It rushes through the house
I blows in the smell of fruit
And animals on the farm
He goes outside and opens the door
The door to the cellar
He sees a chair and stored food
This is his only home
So he goes in the cellar
He locks the door
He gets the rope
And slowly waits for it all to end...
Shadows of my Heart: By Blackbird97
The shadows in my heart are there
They get more difficult to bare
I shut my eyes and I try to disguise
What is there in my heart
But it escapes from me
It isn't difficult to visually see
I see it hurt and I see it lurk
Around the corners of my heart
It draws darkness towards my mind
Which is not very hard to find
I know what it has found
A sound howling out to the moon
You hear it saying this
""Please, the darkness in my heart I wish you dismiss!
Please make it disperse today
If you do I promise to say
I will halt my doings wrong!
I will mark a song hailing you""
but sadly no answer, not a single reply
the dwelling shadow in my heart, will allow me to die.....
Falling: By Blackbird 97
I fall into a deep black hole
That goes on forever
As I fall I see your face
Your heart has been severed
I take a look at him
And grin the greatest grin
I saw how he hurt you
You will never see him again
I think of how it will happen
I start to plan it in my mind
I remember how he deeply hurt you
Happiness you tried to find
I waited for you day in and day out
I thought you would realize
That you would no longer have to fear
When you gazed into my eyes
So as I fall down this pit
Into the regions of your heart
I will stay there to help
We will never again have to be apart
The Invisible Girl: By Blackbird97
As I walked in the hall I saw a girl
She was not there today
She is not there any day
She was not there again today
It hurts my heart so I fall and say,
I say that I need her back
I have the strength she said I lacked
I looked for her all day long
I am starting to think what I said was wrong
I walked in the hall today
She was not there again anyway....
i haven't written any in a while so i don't know how much my skills have improved, but i'll post some more here if i write them.