My Mortal Enemy

[Griffith]

My Mortal Enemy

Why must you drag me down?
My Mortal enemy,
Is there something you have against me?
What is it I did to you?
To have you treat me like you do?
when you look at me, what do you see?
An easy target, or something you don't want to be?
I lash out at you, punching at your face...wait?
Why does this glass shatter? Splintering my hand
I pick a piece up, look into it.
I still see you, i now realize it, I can't get rid of you
You are me,
My Mortal Enemy.

[Davidonsnake]

I thought it lacked the poetic feel up till the end where you made a comeback but it wasn't enough to rise the piece in to higher consideration.

[Griffith]

cool, well its not my best piece.....just one that i am really proud to call my own. i got more. I have a reputation of writing a poem on the spot in like 2-3 minutes.

[Davidonsnake]

You'll improve with time.For now just keep writing no matter how asinine.