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Sinjin
19-10-2005, 01:09
Are you just another pretty face?
Or are you true?
When you smile at me...
Shuld I smile at you??
All twisted and jumbled-up in my head...
As I sit here, in my room
Like always, thinging of you.
For some reason, I dont trust you.
I believe you are a fake.
Like all the rest.
A part of the crowd.
Just another peice of the bread.
Where I fit in,
I dont know
I must leave you and you lies
And continue my journy of life...
Alone.

Starfire
07-11-2005, 03:18
It's alright, but it might be better if you didn't worry about the rhyming so much. Like "you, room, true" in the begging. But I do the same thing sometimes. ><

*should
*thinking
*your lies